Nice! This is great. Can't wait to see more :-)

Um, yeah. Shounen-ai I noted. Not...my ethical tastes but unfortunately my (on occasion) literary tastes (off of FP). Remniscent of some stories by Xandra...but hey, I like it thus far. Keep writing, eh? :)

I like! Muchly! I went to click the next button when I finished and was devastated when it wasn't there. DEVASTATED.
"It was a flump. When you flump to the floor, it isn't supposed to be ballet."
Bahahahahahahaha.
I'm so naming my kid Charlemagne now, btw. Oh, my poor, poor children.

Hmm... Oh-so cute, I'd say. Addy and Cgarm will be the starring couple, I'm assuming? Or is it a different pair? Oh, whatever. I'll know soon enough. I like it much and would be so happy if you continued it. ^_^ I like Charm, I like Addy, and I like J R. The concept's gotta be lots of fun to mess around with, ne? All in all, very good. Continue, please.