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| frugale 2003-11-14 ch 1, | Concrete and classic hatred; you brought a new dimension by making your poem part rythmic, part full(the last stanza...) It adds more intensity in the end. Plus, I love "I’m sorry for the hole in the door, I’m sorry for the slice in the chair, I’m sorry for the broken lights,(...)" |
| Now-silenced 2003-11-09 ch 1, | Wow, now that is some powerful work. Can't help but swallow hard reading a verse like that. Keep up the superb work. S.c |