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Reviews For: Disgrace of my Family

frugale
2003-11-14
ch 1,
Concrete and classic hatred; you brought a new dimension by making your poem part rythmic, part full(the last stanza...) It adds more intensity in the end. Plus, I love "I’m sorry for the hole in the door,
I’m sorry for the slice in the chair,
I’m sorry for the broken lights,(...)"
Now-silenced
2003-11-09
ch 1,
Wow, now that is some powerful work. Can't help but swallow hard reading a verse like that. Keep up the superb work.
S.c
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