Wow, that's . . . Wow! *blinks* Very, very good - I love seasonal poetry. You're really very talented with non-rhyming poetry - I've been trying my hand at it lately, and it's harder than it looks! I commend you.
Tenika Dargan

Beautifully written as always... beautiful... amazing imagery and language...

Autumn's one of my favorite seasons as well. But it's usually so cold here in Canada already in Autumn time but oh well hehe it's a shame that it does not last too long because all thoese pretty leaves fall off of the trees *sigh* but everything must come to an end huh? Good poem darling, gorgeous imagery.

*Jenna*

God, I love autmnal poems... one of the best I've read this year, methinks.

My fave parts were:

'Leaves cleave apart the time we had together'

and

'Dog-ear our page and see the season fade,

away into a Autumn sunset of blue and grey.'

Beautiful.

Mia

I love flal too... great imagery... autumnal...great wor.. me likie!

This is good i enjoyed reading it. I like the imagery you use. Autums my fave season too :D Keep writing.

nice! i like the end a lot, and the the description of dog-eared pages. great poem. keep writing!