Yay!! I love the colors, so specific! Good job. OOh, shameless plug, can't resist... I've revamped my site, it now has a guestbook and all! *bobs head proudly* w.freewebs.com/makethingswrite/ It's my baby. Sign my guestbook?

Vibrant, is a word that comes to mind. Simple names for colors as you have shown can show so much. Nice twist in your articulation.

Wow, you're last line was jarringly out of place. Other than that, I love it. I might combine the first 2 lines of the 2nd stanza tho, I dunno. W/e fits your fancy. I love the way all the colors together make you slightly dizzy from reading it.

Very interesting...fantastical, this has something for everyone because it's not a specific theme or story, its just what you want it to be. My favourite line?" The plum-colored rose red wonders await" it rolls off the tongue. Nice.

Ya stole me title. *snatches it back* except you added a smelly little ! to it... hmph.

Colorful. Very...er...colorful. I think that if you just had them in the first stanza it'd have been more impactful, or something along those lines. The first stanza's all cheerful and describing the setting, but the second one's actually meaningful, and it seems like the color names there were just used to make the rhythm fit right. Well...yeah...first stanza purdy and I loved the last line. Smart smart. Pretty...

i like it

no etereo that made no sense

last line kills my train of thought. you have the last 2 lines of the first stanza rhyming, while the last two of the second stanza completely-dont. Dance is a harsh word after maroon. The word doens;t have to rhyme, just make it..not so danceish. did that make sense at all?