Letter form author:
Sorry if the n-word offends people but I dont use it out of disrespect. I use it as the slang. Only that. Why would I disrespect my people?
Yours,
*CaramelCream*

It wasn't bad, didn't mind it.. I just hate the word "nigger" That's just my opinion though.
Tokiko

I like the whole great big metaphor thing- I haven't seen it done before, good work!

I also liked the voice you put it in; that's not done often either. )

Favorite lines:

"With my clique

Our blood runs thick

A second family

The first just ain't for me."

"Fall is here

That shit is clear

True colors start to bear

Why did my friends disappear?"

((Oh! Four rhyming words in a row! Bravo!))

Yay yay yay! Keep it up!