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| Jemelise 2003-10-31 ch 1,   | ::tear:: i think that was really good...it has a awsome message |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2003-10-27 ch 1, | Interesting metaphor here. It seemed a little choppy in it's rhythm, though. Maybe it's just me... Keep writing. ~Namir Swiftpaw |