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| Aslan Israel 2004-07-21 ch 1,   | I can relate. It sucks to grow apart from the people you thought you would be with for the rest of your life. |
| EternalTimexX 2004-07-04 ch 1, | sometimes its hard to get the idea behind your poetry, but after a few times, it clix. ~*Keep writing*~ |
| Rose Dark Thorn 2004-03-10 ch 1, | No matter what, you never forget. I have experience in that. |
| Gauy 2004-01-20 ch 1, | This was very nice... the best written poem I've saw in awhile ... which hasn't been many sadly... |
| Heather Montgomery 2003-11-04 ch 1, | I love this poem.. I love the metaphors you use, and everything. It's beautiful. Great job. |
| The Black Rider 2003-11-02 ch 1, | Very melancholy and sad and yet strangely beautiful and somewhat triumphant in its language. I really liked it. |
| Dark Angel The Temptress 2003-10-28 ch 1, | that was very good, i think we've all been through broken relationships, i knew exactly what you were talking about. great work |