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| Ahemait 2005-02-08 ch 1,   | oh i love this. the rhymes seem to fit absolutely perfect. some people, myself included in most cases, try far too far to make their poem phyme, but that, as i can tell, is not you. you have an amazing talent with describion and rhyme sequence and writing all together. |
| Reticulatus 2004-02-26 ch 1, | It`s great, very much the way I feel. I don`t believe in god, I believe in me (at least that`s what I`m trying to) and I believe in nature. I think for many people god is just a good possibility to blame for their own mistakes. And if we blame others for our mistakes, we will never be able to learn. Stick to it, my friend, we can`t lead our lives if we depend on a so-called god we`re not sure whether he exists or not. |
| Phoenix Ignition 2004-01-20 ch 1, | You probably won't take my word for it, but you would be a lot more fulfilled if you were open to God. Life is very short, and earthly success is temporary and very fragile. After being a Christian (Well, mostly just in the last few months), I can't imagine how someone could be satisfied without it. Sorry if I sounded preachy or churchy. But my perspective on things has changed, and I want other people to understand it and experience the same thing. :) Anyways, the poem is good, and it's hard to find a poem with decent rhyming these days. |
| Hershey249 2003-11-25 ch 1, | Powerful. This is one stance that you don't see too many people taking, and it shows God from a different perspective. The last two lines are extremely intense. I'm sure everyone's felt that way at some point in their lives. Nice comparisons, and good insight. |
| Incubabe 2003-11-18 ch 1, | Interesing. I liked it in a kinda odd way. I like the last two lines, it's just very well written. Loved it! Thanks for the reviews btw. You're very sweet to me! Diana x |
| Miyabi-chan 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Nice, I really like that one! 9 more... I think. |
| The Beast 2003-10-28 ch 1, | Indeed, "cut thy strings, and let thee be." A true vision, very much akin to No More Puppeteers (By Myself) it is good to see another author with much the same views and class as myself out there. keep writing.' I am looking foward to more of your work, Victor Soulstorm. |