Reviews for Winter's Heart - FictionPress.com

ShaeAndrea 2003-12-06 ch 1,	'But still in Hades does Persephone stay' is a lovely allusion. I can see this world in my mind. You have done a great job of capturing winter's essence. I applaud you.
Miyabi-chan 2003-11-08 ch 1,	You are right, you do describe winter very well. What is wrong with winter though? 10 more.
Hershey249 2003-10-31 ch 1,	Nice metaphors, I love the bit about Persephone. I have one criticism, and this goes for more than one of your poems that I've read. Be a bit more careful about putting apostrophes in to show possession, and a number of these that I've read will change from spiffy to brilliant. You've got major talent, don't mar it with a simple grammatical error. Just some friendly advice. :)