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| i-see-faeries 2008-01-18 ch 1,   | Aw, cute. I love and innocent these characters are. And the feel of this fic is awesome. Like old Britain or something. I love it! =] Great job! |
| Esquirella 2007-01-22 ch 1, | This was a nice story. |
| RaavYouNe 2005-08-22 ch 1, | Wonderful story~ thoroughly enjoyed it n.n If you continue, it would be awesome, but I love it like it is too. |
| Katie 2005-05-26 ch 1, | Wow! You are a talented writer, the story was terrific. You were able to depict so much of the character's emotional state so that the audience was able to become attached to the characters. Wow. Bravo!! One disturbing factor to the story was the ending where Donnie thought "That the man had made him realize what he was truly worth" does this sentence speak about his worth as a prostitute or does it mean that someone who is worthy of love b/c at this point Donnie seems to still have reservation about Brent's actual love for him and vice versa. Anyways, apologize for he rambling, love the story, would love to see the story continued. |
| jaz07 2005-04-17 ch 1, | interesting story |
| JesusFreak-Walken-in-the-Li... 2004-10-31 ch 1, | wow i've been reading that for like 2 months i finally finished it's really good you better add more or i'll die your such a good writer and please write on spring ^ _ ^ please please please please please please! and on this story to ^ _ ^ -kitty |
| subtleline 2004-10-14 ch 1, | Poor Brent,..I hope he ends up happy together w/ Donny. U kno..work thrught those issues hey both harbor and be truely happy. It's a very good story, very deep. I liked the boots. Not sure y but they added a special element to the story. Very well written. |
| Goldensong 2004-07-12 ch 1, | Yay! So good! Nice one-shot, works really well. |
| Mewta 2004-04-27 ch 1, | Wow! This story is so great! I hope you continue this, but if not it's still a wonderful one-shot. ^-^ And Spring is a awesome story too! You're such a great author! |
| Your Different October 2004-01-24 ch 1, | Aw... that was so sweet. *cries* I lurved it! Okay, so now I have to go get ready for a Sarah Brightman concert. ^_^ v Later! ~DM~ |
| afk 2004-01-19 ch 1, | heey also nice story ^~! hahaha,, i've read both your stories in one day! yehi! lol ^^ i would like this to continue, it would be interesting |
| Prince(ss) of Hell 2004-01-04 ch 1, | That was so sweet ::sniffs:: I'd like it if you continued it but even if you don't it's fine as is. ...And I better seen an update for "Spring"! ^_^ I've been pining away waiting for a next chapter in that... ~Prince(ss) |
| Nightmare Wolf 2003-11-26 ch 1, | That was actually sort of fluffy-sweet at the end. Very nice. I loved it. |
| cordy 2003-10-31 ch 1, | absolutely wonderful! the way you describe everything, it just creates a perfect world to imagine- i loved it! |
| Blankppr 2003-10-30 ch 1, | Oh... that was really good and well written! I'd be really happy if you continued it! |