| Reviews for Not To Be Human |
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Draith 11/8/03 . chapter 1Dark poet's vice rewarded twice! Another great poem regarding the darkner things of life. It strikes me nearly as the type of string that could work nicely as a chorus to a song that elaborates on this thought. I like it as a short piece by itself though, as it really touches nicely on the thought! Love your writing style! -Draith |
AvaRicE 10/28/03 . chapter 1I love this poem - I can relate to it more than I want to admit _ Only nitpicks are the last two lines... try not to use slang/web abbrieviations. |