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| KatyGirl1219 2003-11-01 ch 1,   | The ending feels a bit incomplete. Maybe try bringing it back around to tie it to the beginning? I do love the flow of this poem. And the symbolism behind it is exquisite. Please do keep writing! ::hugs:: |