Reviews for Thruth and Lie - FictionPress.com

KatyGirl1219 2003-11-01 ch 1,	It's rather good...but at times, it seems as though it could be split into two poems...for instance, the last line is a bit confusing. It threw me off a bit. Consider working on it/changing it, maybe? It's really good, though. Thank you muchly for my reviews! Keep writing! ::hugs::
ana banana 2003-10-28 ch 1,	what can i say? i simply like it. i often cross that line too often if i may say so myself. keep on writing.