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| WesternPrincess 2007-08-09 ch 34,  | abuseI hope you know that was a terribly frustrating ending. But a fun story. |
| NON-M 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseHey, I am really confused. I thought you took the Fairy Kingdom of the site and were trying to get it published. What happened? As you can tell I haven't been on fictionpress for a LONG time and btw, my old email's not working anymore. |
| Raberba girl 2005-04-02 ch 34, anon. | abuseHah, that ended up being more than just the first few chapters. *applauds* |
| Raberba girl 2005-04-02 ch 31, anon. | abuse*laughing* That bit with the nurse staring at Jaz cracked me up. |
| Raberba girl 2005-04-02 ch 29, anon. | abuseHah, I love the ending lines of this chapter. |
| Raberba girl 2005-04-02 ch 26, anon. | abuseSome of the dialogue was a little confusing in this chapter; it helps if each person speaking gets a new paragraph.Aw, Jaz-bunny. I feel so bad for him. |
| Raberba girl 2005-04-02 ch 21, anon. | abuseHah, scary Gadon. *grin* |
| Raberba girl 2005-04-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is so funny. Gotta feel sorry for those poor fairies, though I don't blame Carrie a bit. |
| Raberba girl 2005-04-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseI remembered this story and wanted to re-read the first few chapters. La, Jaz, I love you. |
| beulah 2004-07-02 ch 1, | abusegreat! |
| zagato 2004-06-07 ch 34, | abusewow! this is so amazing |
| serif 2004-02-29 ch 2, | abuseI'M REALLY INTRESTED IN WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT |
| Arkeyi 2003-12-06 ch 3, | abuseI found this chapter really funny! He... I wonder if she's gonna ever go into Fairyland... if it really DOES exist |
| Arkeyi 2003-12-06 ch 2, | abuseI like it! |
| Arkeyi 2003-12-06 ch 1, | abuseGood job! It has a lot of detail. I like how you don't just make Carrie give in really fast. |