Congrats on another book finished. I will miss it, though. There were many twists and turns, always relevent to the story. I liked all of the characters, but I think that Kymenos was my favorite: he was the funniest and I could relate to him. This story was also very funny.
~PC~

I'm said it's over. This series is one of the best I've ever read, and one of my favorites.
I can't wait to read the next story set in Faean!
WhiteLyhter
P.S. I thought the epilogue was especially well done.

I would like, first of all, to thank you for sharing this incredible epic satire. The characters are well-developed, they are realistic, and most of all, they are fun. The world of Faean is incredibly believable; the concept of the Cycle and the Wonders is something that I would like to see more of. I'm also interested in seeing some kind of chart that lays out exactly what all of the Wonders are, and how the interact. :D
So, yes. Thank you for sharing this vision with us; it's been one helluva ride, and I wouldn't trade it for the world. :D

Love the chapter -- Elary is probably my favorite after Kymenos -- but noticed a couple of typoes. :D One 'their' instead of 'there', and 'signal the ilantien' instead of 'single the ilantien'. Just thought you might want to know. :D

*childish wails*... but I didn't want it to end!
And you didn't say what happens to Kymenos and Nightstone (although that looks the sort of thing you might go back to in another story, so I'm not as bothered as I might be) and I'm distinctly annoyed at what happened to Ternora. I mean, I know it had to happen eventually, I just wish it didn't. If that makes sense.
Still loved the story, though. *gives rabidly envious look*

I don't want it to end!

... ~sniffles~ Gear be I'll miss them all... Kyminos, Skyeen, Nightstone, Elary, Silar, Ternoara... all of em... You should publish your work... Make load of cash and have millions of gullib... i mean... Loyal fans... Do the Kyminos thing lol ^_^
Good luck on the next Tales of Fayen project... May it be as Memorable as all the rest before it, and even more!
-Himitsu The Hunter

A beautiful story, elegant and humourous, and definetly a worthwile read. Thankyou for writing this pentad and the lives you have created within it. This is a story that will live on in my mind for a long time to come.
Love your work, as always,
~April

Wonderful. Done. At last.
So what ~does~ happen with Nightstone and Kymenos? I really really really really really want to know.
I can't wait for you next story. Until then,
Eagerly anticipating,
A. Lee

Wahh! It's over! I'm sobbing as much as Alliana without her limes *sob*
Must...have...new...story...
and GET PUBLISHED! I ORDER YOU! =)

If Kesista is in the Green Isles and Luden is going to who I think he's going to, why does Talazh still have Destiny hanging around him? I thought Destiny didn't exist in the Green Isles. Anyway, great work! I hope that when you said you'd be doing something different with the Faean stories in the future, you didn't intend to start taking them "seriously". You have a real flair for cliches. Don't give up on the humor. With the upcoming elections I'm going to need as much mockery of pretentious crap as I can get and Terry Pratchett can only write so fast (not as fast as you). Thanks again!

I'm beginning to accept the idea that this story is ending...
I'm still a little sad, though. Write another story about Faean soon!
I have a question. The quotes at the beginning of the chapter, if they're said by a character from another story (Klessa, for example), were they taken from the actual story? Or did you make an entirely new quote? It'd be an interesting way to tie your stories together, if some of the quotes were from previous stories.

Wow ... Kymenos just seems to get more and more enemies, doesn't he?

Nightstone I believe has a crush.

You really should just make a book with all the bits of advice at the beginning of your stories.