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| Nephriteon 2004-12-14 ch 1,   | Your stories always makes me cry. You know how people say to authors, "Oh your stories is soo good! I cried so much! blah blah blah...but seriously...this time, what I am telling you, is real. No fake. No fake appraisal. No spurious comment made just to add a sentiment touch to the author...the emotions which your writing, your emaculately conceived tales, trigger, is ever so real. I love this. I really feel. I really believe. YOU ARE THE GREATEST. FULL STOP. |
| aiur 2004-09-07 ch 1, | i was bored so i was tidying up my bio and my favourite lists, and i happened to re-read your "Porcelain". and i was so touched - again - that i had to come and read something else you'd written. - i can't get over how good you are with the short story. and not really short story, even. you tell a tale in a couple of pages, and it's beautiful. breathtaking. because you write the emotion so well, and the reasons so subtely, that it all blends together into this amazing piece. - there's so much that's overlooked on this site, and so much that gets credit it doesn't deserve. i can see why your work would be brushed over, but really there's no reason for it at all. you have such a style. it stuns me into silence as i read. and i'm choking as i breathe. honestly. i didn't think it was possible to be this moved by writing so short and so apparently routine. but it's not. there's so much to this. - i just thought you'd like to know that. and you're going on my favourite authors list - which i never like to use. because honestly it's more the way you write than what you write. what you write is - beautiful. and ever so raw. but the way you write it brings it to life in a way i never could. ~k8 |
| Rainy 2004-07-15 ch 1, | I agree with Gabby. It makes you think. And I can connect with this piece so well. You need more recognition. You're a wonderful writer... |
| pieces 2004-06-01 ch 1, | Breathtaking. It makes me sit back and wonder what the ** everything is about - writing or saying or trying to slam away. Screaming against. Awesome piece, I love it. Gabby |
| Lindsay Marie 2003-10-28 ch 1, | OOh good beginning! Very descriptive and I could really feel her pain. Why is she so upset though? It might be better if you write in the past tense...just a thought. Update soon! |