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Wow.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on here...

I can see that i will need to read this several times. Kiv reminds me of my own Tiger, except Tiger is very sweet, almost, no, is COMPLETLY childlike.

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Uh oh, I'd say that's a problem... For Kiv and Nolen, not for your plot. Very cool!
*blushes* Um, thanks for the complement :) I'm glad to send out cc when people listen :)
Anyways, in the last two chpaters nothing has jumped out at me and screamed "wrong!" so good job! :) I'm still looking forward to more
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams

Another cool chapter. I like how then both ended in darkness. This chapter was nicely done, though a bit creepy with the burning down his house with his family in it :S But still good. I think you should leave a few spaces or have a * in between scenes. When he begins to remember something different, you should have one of those, other than that, it's very well written, and I'm looking forward to more :)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams

Hello! Very interesting story so far, and I love your style of writing, but as I always do, I have some prolbems to point out :)
1-"Kiv had never seen a spaceship like this one before" - if he has amnesia how does he know if he's never saw one like it before?
2-"...emitting from his blaster."+"...holstering his blaster and leading Kiv inside the ship." Blasters are from Star Wars and phasers are from Star Trek, try making up your own weapon with it's own name. It can be a laser because that's not copywrited, but give it a cool name that's your own :)
3-"This was insane; how could he be over six hundred years old? Nobody lived that long." Again, if he couldn't remember, how can he think that?
Other than that very good chapter, I love the length. Great start and I'm going to read the second chapter now :)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams