Reviews for Flashing steel, Singing blade

Hershey249 2003-11-25 ch 1,	drools on the metaphors cleans it up Ah. cough Anyway, if you couldn't tell already, I absolutely adore the star/barren moons metaphor. It's a beautiful, original, and insightful comparison. Wow. Your choice to begin and end on the same line really fits this well. It's another reminder that this is a neverending cycle. Great stuff. ^_^
Catella Erato 2003-11-09 ch 1,	O, very nice. Reminds me of Kenshin (which is the best Anime EVER!). Great work! ~ Little Dog Muse
Miyabi-chan 2003-11-08 ch 1,	It was okay. Thanx again. Can't find my third poem... must find.
Ishuzu 2003-11-04 ch 1,	I liked how you compared the human's need to extend its grasp with sword play
God's daughter 2003-10-31 ch 1,	this poem is hot b/c it's so true.