What a creepy poem, yet... funny. I like the lines, 'Your eyeball surely do look tasty, I'd like to roll them up in pastry.' You would make a great chef, you know that? Invite all you enemies, poison the food, kill them all. *laughs evilly* Good job!
much love
vintage fade

This poem made me laugh out loud. And now I feel guilty, because I'm laughing at someone being cut up and eaten. *guilty grin* Its the perfect mix between comedy and horror. Your poems are so much fun to read because they have a definite rhythm to them.

Haha! I love it! So cheery, yet so dark. I love poems like these.

oh wow, not at all what i was expecting! funny yet disturbing, good stuff.

Whoa, creepy! But very funny too! Great poem once again!

lol *laughs* very good very funny - dark humour galore - dont you just love it
:) well done
hearme

I think moosenotmeese is right... you have a way of doing that with the dark in everything!

lol! that was hilarious!

loved the imagery-very descriptive!

and i also loved the rhyming-good job :)

Creepy, humorous...but like moosesNOTmeese said, it's got dark undertones. Oh, dear, I'm not saying anything new, am I?

A new take on loving someone's physical attributes so much!

Izzy J.

I like it a lot! It's really different from your other poems, ut it is so cool! Really creepy too when you think about it.

Excellent! Wow, when I first read it I was chuckling away, it's got a kind of nursery-rhyme rhythm, short and sweet, but then I realise that there're some seriously dark undertones - that last line is rather evil (reminds me of that fairy-tale line "I'll grind your bones to make my bread")