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Reviews For: You Do, I Don't, I Do, Too Late
Manuel Fajar 2004-09-16 . chapter 1
You capture a lot of life in this poem. -m-
WarriorHeart 2004-01-13 . chapter 1
Because of the title I was expecting it to go on a bit longer for the "Too Late" part. It leaves me wondering...
Flavor of Rain 2004-01-03 . chapter 1
Yes, I love you.
But I’ll never let you know.
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Amen to that >_>
avidelecteur 2003-10-30 . chapter 1
I can tell you're doing something with the number of syllables per line or something, because of your choice as to how to word phrases, but I'm not sure exactly. I was most definately not expecting that twist at the end. I don't quite understand her/his feelings, why she's saying that. But it's a really interesting poem. Not all that lyrical, but for this content I think that's probably what you were going for.
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