Also feels a bit like Wodsworth's "Little do we see in nature that is ours. . ." But, cheer-up, the sun'll be around a few more billion years! *LoL* -m-

Your poem is a lot different from his. His sounds really cynical and sarcastic and ironic, and all those good things, while yours sounds more searching, wondering. It does create that feeling of "what's the point?" tho, without making life seem pointless, if you follow that. I mean, you make the reader (or at least ME) feel like there is a point to life, we just don't know what it is yet.