I have to say of all your stuff I've read, I like this the most.

I really don't know what it is about it. It's very short, yet somehow sounds... epic?

Anyways. It's very nice. Wonderful job.

This sounds like it might be good as part of a fantasy book, like a vision or incantation or something. It has that feel of telling of something more, and would stand better with something than by itself. Very good, though.

Well written, powerful imagery. One of the best poems I've probably ever found on here!

Interesting

OMG OMG SERTZ I LUV U U R THE BEST EVER AND THIS POEM IS SO GOOD OMG OMG!!11234305R83