Reviews for Pin on Denim Shirt

CatClawz 2004-05-17 ch 1,	interesting style, very clear
Kelpylion 2003-12-13 ch 1,	Wonderfully fantastical-the tone of imagining something fairly ordinary doing something impossible and magical-like flying!-is just so refreshing. It's great that an older (than me) writer can still have imagination.
Mystic Kiwi 2003-11-04 ch 1,	weird, yet good. ~Kiwi
avidelecteur 2003-10-30 ch 1,	Interesting vision. I wasn't really expecting that when you started describing the pin, I thought it would just be a descriptive poem. What's with the slash, tho? I didn't get that... Anyway, good job. I like it a lot.
katyruth 2003-10-29 ch 1,	lovely descriptions. i like the end line, it gives a good feel to the end of the poem. keep writing!
Miamouse 2003-10-29 ch 1,	I like this. Short, and sort of has a clipped, metallic feel- in keeping with the subject. Keep it up, this is lovely. Mia