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Reviews For: Pin on Denim Shirt

CatClawz
2004-05-17
ch 1,
interesting style, very clear
Kelpylion
2003-12-13
ch 1,
Wonderfully fantastical-the tone of imagining something fairly ordinary doing something impossible and magical-like flying!-is just so refreshing. It's great that an older (than me) writer can still have imagination.
Mystic Kiwi
2003-11-04
ch 1,
weird, yet good.

~Kiwi
avidelecteur
2003-10-30
ch 1,
Interesting vision. I wasn't really expecting that when you started describing the pin, I thought it would just be a descriptive poem. What's with the slash, tho? I didn't get that... Anyway, good job. I like it a lot.
katyruth
2003-10-29
ch 1,
lovely descriptions. i like the end line, it gives a good feel to the end of the poem. keep writing!
Miamouse
2003-10-29
ch 1,
I like this. Short, and sort of has a clipped, metallic feel- in keeping with the subject.

Keep it up, this is lovely.

Mia
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