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| lilitaliandragon 2005-11-04 ch 2,  | abuseare you going to write anymore for this cuz i think it's quite interesting... |
| duck 2004-08-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseUPDATE! FINSH IT! WRITE! |
| Tempest 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abusecourtney wrote about CTY! well, kinda! hurray for courtney! |
| Allie 2004-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseawful. the most cliche thing you've written as of yet. unless you plan on beginning the new 'babysitter's club' series for gay kids, please stop writing. |
| changeling0203 2004-01-20 ch 2, | abuse, Where's the third chapter? "Love Slowly" me!" Wow, that sounded dirty. But not entirely unarousing. I'm going now. |
| Kymik 2003-11-18 ch 2, | abuseA great story so far with a lot of potential. It still isn't clear who your main character is though: Izzy, Dylan or Reese? Keep it up, cheers! |
| Ellen Enchanted 2003-11-18 ch 2, | abuseGood! I like, nice title, no real complaints on any sort of front. |
| changeling0203 2003-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI have no idea what JHU/CTY is, but I think I know what it's like. I went to a place for gifted artists (writing department) called CSA. I'd call it my home away from home, but it IS my home. I was only there for a month, but the good-bye is still destroying me. I'm in the process of writing an allegory about what it's like, but it's still in the rough stages. You need to keep writing. I want to know more about this place and about the characters and everything that is JHU/CTY. |
| lilitaliandragon 2003-10-29 ch 1, | abusegreat dialogue... i didn't talk that much about that stuff when i was a caa...but i guess that's cuz i was at caa not really cty... |