hey it had your pen name in it! coolness lolz ... this was ANOTHER short, sweet story from you ... do you ever write anything longer? maybe you should try your hand at a multi-chaptered fic. i'd love to read whatever you write =)
~k8

I like it. The whole rain thing was nice. I think if you lengthened it a little it would be a little better but other than that it was pretty good.
~Lin

Aww. That was sweet. I wish I could be like that, alone and happy. Not that I'm not...well I'm not really *happy*. Um...I'm stop babbling now. I really liked your story!