Reviews for Through the Dawn Fog

Eternally Discombobulated 2003-10-31 ch 5,	Amazing! Wonderful! Write more, you absolutely must! I can't wait to see what happens. There were a few missing commas in the beginning and you spelled 'lose' as 'loose,' but the overall thing was so good I barely noticed. Keep writing! --Bug
chip 2003-10-30 ch 5,	damn girl do u rite good!! "the story is unravelling wonderfully if i may say...ahem..." newayz..kekekekeep up the good work!! gawsh i sound like wome school teacher..but hey..i really mean it!! kekeke and damn does that elaine girl KICKASS!! she is soo cool!! cool fighter cool everything!! kekekeke newayz keep posting!! hope u finish the story!!
chip 2003-10-30 ch 4,	wow!! yay!! i love this story!! the best thing about it is that it is long and everything is in depth!! gawsh this story rulz!! off to read more!!
chew chew chewy!! 2003-10-30 ch 1,	well!! that was an interesting start to a story!! :D although there was a couple of spelling errors..the story has started out great!! well im off to read more!!