WOW! That was so amazing! You should so turn this into a story!! I would so read this I like evryday if you did that would be so cool!!

aw so cute! this has such incredible depth beneath it all, too, as always. i always love short stories about the sun and stars and that kinda thing ... just 'cause they're there for everyone to see. it's like something everyone can relate to, the feeling when you stare up at all of that. and you've definitely conveyed emotion in this piece that was easy to relate to. =) glad you liked my reviews i really like your work!! i'll be waiting for the day when i hear from you again and you're going on my alert list
~k8

This is a great beginning for a story. You make me try to guess what is going to happen the next day since she hates the next day to come. Well, anyway, please update soon!