Reviews for like Scattered Dead Leaves

flowerthief 2003-12-30 ch 1,	I like this one. It's really beautifully written. I think I heard something somewhere: silence is sometimes more eloquent then words could ever be. Something like that. Well, I like your poem. AC
Aaron Portelli 2003-12-05 ch 1,	"...never stopping, or truly going anywhere. Like scattered dead leaves." I love that bit the most. Your poetry's great. Hope you write even more! :)
Soryu 2003-10-29 ch 1,	Well done, well done! Almost like song lyrics, with the chorus of "Don't Leave. just walk with me. neither of us have to say a thing. No, not a thing - just kick dead leaves" If those four lines were repeated, it would be a great song ;) Anyway, great flow and excellent wording! Write on, and Au Revoir!