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| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-11 ch 10,   | 5 Newtons? That is a hell of a lot of pressure. I am going to spend the rest of my life with my mouth closed! |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-11 ch 7, | This story has so much information crammed into it. I'm saying ti was good. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-11 ch 6, | Great thoughtful chapter. Very peaceful. I really like it. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-11 ch 1, | This is reall interesting. Great characters. |
| Instant Ninja 2005-06-08 ch 36, | ...hm...it's ok... the plot excellent, although it's kind of farsically dystopian...? ...i dislike the characters, though... they're stale. dead. robotic. you change their views a little too dramatically, and it disrupts story flow. ...other than that, it was pretty good. -INK- |
| Velvet Valentine 2004-02-07 ch 3, | I'm only on Chapter Three, but I really like this so far. I like your style. And I will keep reading! |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 36, | That, i guess, is a better conc. than the other chapter that i just reviewed. Over all, i think that this was a good story ... wound together very well. On a scale of one to ten, i give it a nine and a half. A well written story, i enjoyed reading it and the philosophy connected with it has taught me an important lesson. Thankyou |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 35, | This would make a good conclusion, but i see there's another chapter... |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 34, | Okay, scary ... but ok. |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 33, | Omg, what is happening? Okay, reality bites, but why so hard? |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 32, | Okay, the prologue all comes into place now ... i like it alot! |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 31, | This is unusual, but very interesting ... i'm to read more |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 28, | Okay, now. Stephen is SO disturbed that this isn't funny ... |
| The Great Muses 2004-01-23 ch 27, | Oh ... the plot really thickens now! |
| The Great muses 2004-01-23 ch 26, | This is so sad!! Poor ella ... ah well. I can't really say much ... |