your rhyming and flow is still great in this poem... I 've had to overcome suicidal tendancies but they usually come back...

Great stuff! I'm still not sure what exactly you killed, but it was beautiful still! I loved the beginning!

I am really stuck for what to say, i liked it. It's kinda odd, granted, but it's something to think about.

Well done!

XXNerfxx

interesting the a/n is helpful... great poem i like it a lot!

i dont think the rhymings off.

i wish i could over come things in my sleep too... o well

M.T.