|Reviews for Be Hit and Hold On|
| Will Klemm 12/2/03 . chapter 1
i enjoy the poeticness of this poem. esp. the last line "nothing's worth the salt in your tears."
| jsullins 11/12/03 . chapter 1
that was really good... i really liked it. thanks for reviewing my poems... i dont get that many reviews.. *tear* lol yea... keep writing... your work is great!
-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-
| JJR Meerraf 11/10/03 . chapter 1
Great stuff, and excellent imagery! But what else is new? :-). Keep it up!
| Nerf 11/3/03 . chapter 1
Wow! i reli reli love this, i think it mite b my favourite of urs (or one of)
| simpleplan13 10/30/03 . chapter 1
interesting format & it doesnt suck I like it especially the ending!
| Native Tongue 10/30/03 . chapter 1
I tend to automatically stray away from any typical 'please read this even though I think it sucks' posts. But I gave this one a chance, and I haven't regretted it. I like the overall message underlying this piece. With a few edits here and there, this could turn out to be a great piece of work.
| Empty Inside 10/30/03 . chapter 1
i like it... its deep