i enjoy the poeticness of this poem. esp. the last line "nothing's worth the salt in your tears."

that was really good... i really liked it. thanks for reviewing my poems... i dont get that many reviews.. *tear* lol yea... keep writing... your work is great!

-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-

Great stuff, and excellent imagery! But what else is new? :-). Keep it up!

Wow! i reli reli love this, i think it mite b my favourite of urs (or one of)

Well done!

XXNerfxx

interesting format & it doesnt suck I like it especially the ending!

I tend to automatically stray away from any typical 'please read this even though I think it sucks' posts. But I gave this one a chance, and I haven't regretted it. I like the overall message underlying this piece. With a few edits here and there, this could turn out to be a great piece of work.

-Black Thought

i like it... its deep

M.T.