i followed a link from a link from a link, you know. and i randomly picked this out of all your other storiies. it's awesome. i would have never really given your page a thought, but i'll think about this every time i'm on a train or bus. it really made me think. thank you.

yup.. we live in a deranged society these days alright... i, however, have never taken a train..

..i think that code exists everywhere ^^; this is really good, it's like a slice of life..and also tells us kind of, how the code is wrong in these cases.. eg. with the ending and the little girl forgetting about the homelss man..
i didn't notice any spelling mistakes.. but i was reading to read ^^; its really good!

Where I live there's no subway, only city bus, yet the "code" is still very much a presence. I like this; realistic and engaging, paints a picture of everyday life very well. My only criticism is a few spelling errors.