This is why I am enomored with you. You are so insightful, so delightful. You are unique! I cannot forget you. In fact, I am STILL drowning in your lake (go see!)
i wuv u ::cuddles::
-+SotW+-

It is perfect until you begin to use "we". I could say that I understand, or things like that, but is it the point? I hope you have morw written work of this kind.

Your wrong.You will be remember,for as I see it everyone has you one a favorites list on this site.Even I do,I admit I'm rather jelous of you but that's probably my fault for not posting stories or poems.You life sounds not to bad,I think the reason you don't know many people around you is because you'r hanging around people that are cruel,stupid,and ignerint.I use to do that.Be your self and you'll get far.At the end of your life you'll have had dreams set and acomplished and you'll be happy.Trust me,everyone gets one dream done.I'd like to read more of this if you don't mind so I'll keep an eye out for a new chapter if you'r going to post.

I have a small doubt that I know exactly how you feel, because as I read it, I felt the need to write that I knew how you felt, but you know, I really don't. People all take things differently. But this is really good. I really like it. And please, don't change. I love you just the way you are.

-Baby sister

Wow . . . this is really deep and powerful and no matter what you think or other people tell you I think that you CAN convey your points and emotions beautifully; much better than me aswell!.
*lime-girl*