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| Super*Nova*Ness 2004-04-11 ch 1,   | That's a great metaphor. It's briliant. Simply briliant. Good job. *applauds* |
| Sound of a Smile 2004-01-16 ch 1, | I love this song. It's an awesome metaphor, and I can actually here the tune in my head, which is rare for me. Beautiful. |
| jctstorage 2003-12-09 ch 1, | Aww. It's a cute song, but more important, it's got a nice point to it underneath its cuteness. Nicely done. :) |
| spazticpoetgrl 2003-12-03 ch 1, | wow. i like this song. its a different concept, i like different things. this is awesome, i like the flow the chorus and everything. awesome. keep writin -Spaz |
| Shattereddreams 2003-11-18 ch 1, | Yeah well, you know me, I write in fits and starts as always. That was my second poem I've ever written btw. I think this is good- I like the fact its totally original but some bits don't flow as well as the others. But I like the bits with {that around them a lot. Toodles x |
| Rannathalas's Realm 2003-10-31 ch 1, | I love this poem. YOu really have the beat down and I like the way you look at things- the artist way. I don't think I've heard anyone do that before. You got the ryme down with out being repetitive, too. I love it! |