just wanted to let you know you are using 'your' incorrectly. 'Your' is used to announce ownership ex/ "This is your home". Many times you used 'your' when you should have been using 'you're' which is the abbreviation of 'you are'. :)

Aw. The ending is sad. I loved this one too though, I really love Daemir. And I love how Vilya turned out, at least before that happened to him. He became more and more like Kirash in the beginning of The Faery Prince, back when I liked him. In this one I just plain out didn't like Kirash and Galin. Haha. But now I'm gonna go read...The Jewel Servant? Was it? Anyways. Really loved it. Sad ending, but it's still good.

Hi! I really like your story. Your characters are very engaging and the plot is interesting. Daemir kind of is getting the short end of the stick but I hope it'll turn around for him. So my biggest problem with The Moon Twins was actually the format. I know that fictionpress doesn't always make formatting the easiest thing, but you need something to break up the different scenes and changing of point of view. It was rather confusing in parts when it changed so quickly. I'd suggest a line between. Love your story; am going to finish reading it now.

LOL i love lyssa! She's hilarious! *stabs risha*

that was cute...

AHAHAHA! i think i'm inn love with Lyssa, she's clever!

You are downright sadistic.
Do you realize this?
Good.
Now since I'm a hopeless adict and really want Day to have his boy-toy, I'm going to go read the next one.
~You get half a cookie. You get the rest when I see a certain couple looking VERY happy and slightly guilty.~

OMG I love it! Daemir is my favorite character so far. (Just in case you care)

You're lucky that you told us that you're writting a sequel because i was going to send you lots of hate mail! However sence you ARE writting a sequel I shall congradulate you on youe THREE excellent stories ( yes I've read them all so far and also I'd like to appologise for not giving more reviews. They are excellent stories however. :)

*draws blades* oh despite that bold warning, i want to so soso kill you like NOW!

NO! UGH!

* looking spiteful* wel, Risha is so going to be surprised when he finds out that Vilya is Daemir's sire and all, now where were we? oh yes, Vilya wouldn't allow that. i'm prety sure of that, and the hum, two kings probably won't allow it also.hehe.in for a penny in for a pound, although that phrase probably doesn't have anything to do with the situation.

I am very happy for the existance of that sequel, or else I think I might just go mad... Loved this, Lyssa is so cool!

hey i loved the story. what Risha did to Talan wasn't nice. Keep up the good work
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::Blinks:: That was cruel. I was really happy when I saw that you had continued writing this after such as long time. Resc is still my favorite character. He seems the most grounded of all the characters. I like Garin quite a bit, but the whole marriage agreement seemed underhanded. Kirash used to be a favorite character of mine, but he got just too...whiny. Good story, now I'm off to read the sequel.