that was beautiful -sniffles-

what?!?! im sorry, but what was the point of that?? o.O??

WHOO! GO VALNDI! LOVE LOVE!
It is the influence of the pocky and cookies =^^= so do not be alarmed it I do review for all 48/27/29 chapters in your stories later =^^=

so nice~~ ok! onward to the next!! mwhahaha

oh my.. Yamato? wif scales... now that's creepy..

great writing.. still love the way u write ur stories... hehe... i forgot all bout the addition of the story.. I'll finish reading this another day~~ can't wait~

Wow, this was a really well-written story. I'm surprised you haven't gotten many reviews; it deserves so much more attention than it has now! I enjoy reading about your world with Salyti and Valndi and the others. ^_^ I can't wait for you to write more about it, even if Earth people aren't involved at all within it.
Once again, an awesome job well done!

Interesting last two chapters- getting more into the main character's pov and all. I can't wait to read more, so keep on writing, okay?

Oh, Yamato... *sighs* I like him, he's a cool character. I hope his cape doesn't mean what I think it does... please update this soon- this is as good, if not better, than the original story.

Salyti, don't you DARE die on us! *slaps him* Grr. ^^; Enjoying this story, off to read more!

Glad to see a sequel, and from another person's point of view, too! Spiffy! I like what I've read so far. Off I go to read more! ^^;

Well this story has all the great characteristics of a writers journey so I'm deffinetly lookin forward to the next chapter. U are doing a great job with Mei and Chris is my favorite character for sure. Man, I'm the most sane-sounding person who reviewed.

Well, that last conversation between Mei and Salyti was certainly an interesting one. Good for Salyti to take so long to figure out what she was talking about; of course such a thought would be far from his mind.
I like your characterization of Mei, what with her general shamelessness and willing to be very open in matters of sexuality. I think it very much fits the person she is and the life that we know she's been living.
And Gwaihir's showing such protectiveness for Taylor! I would expect no less of him. His recklessness is lovely as well. Nice way to break a tense moment.
But Kiram was raped... Her pregnancy happened before her marriage to Kenji. I wonder if I'm missing/forgetting something or it's something that hasn't been revealed yet. In either case...that's sad!
Chris is freaking me out. This split personality deal could make for some interesting occurrences. I feel like Mei's thought processes noticing Chris's sudden change in demeanor could have been written a bit more smoothly, though. It felt very much like you wanted to reveal that character trait, so Mei noticed it. I mean, it seemed a little unnatural. But I suppose I do understand Chris jumping to the conclusion that he had scared Mei. He probably gets that a lot.
I love Yamato. He's such a sweetie! And Lenleth...well, I look forward to seeing more of him. I'd like to get a better hold on his personality, although his relationship with Yamato is just plain fun.
Salyti and Mahyia...can't wait to see more of this relationship. It's so cute that he's in love now. I wonder what sort of role she'll play?
And Salyti's mentioning that Taylor's been tortured... I wonder if he meant that literally. I worry that he did. I can't wait until they reach Taylor! Poor guy...what's been happening to him?
So basically I'll be watching for your next chapter. Good job on these last few!

yay continue!

great job keep writing