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| Saeger 2004-11-18 ch 1, | Wow... I like the emotion you put in, even if it is a little veiled. I can sympathize with the narrator, really well... That was well written, short, and sweet. |
| Tabi Berkey 2004-11-15 ch 1, | Very nice piece, keep up the good work. |
| nine iron 2004-04-27 ch 1, | Loving the rhyme scheme. Its so sad, "empty" is such a strong word here. I just think the lines of some of your poems are too long, it just affects the readability. Great talent, wonderful wording in all your poems I have read so far. Nine Iron |
| Maeghan Jade 2003-12-01 ch 1, | Aw...so sad and beautiful. Well-written, if a tad brief. |