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Reviews For: Behind the shadows

Saeger
2004-11-18
ch 1,
Wow... I like the emotion you put in, even if it is a little veiled. I can sympathize with the narrator, really well... That was well written, short, and sweet.
Tabi Berkey
2004-11-15
ch 1,
Very nice piece, keep up the good work.
nine iron
2004-04-27
ch 1,
Loving the rhyme scheme. Its so sad, "empty" is such a strong word here. I just think the lines of some of your poems are too long, it just affects the readability. Great talent, wonderful wording in all your poems I have read so far.
Nine Iron
Maeghan Jade
2003-12-01
ch 1,
Aw...so sad and beautiful. Well-written, if a tad brief.
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