Well written!

Man, you don't know how much addicted I got to this story. It was really amazing! The characters and their dialogs were alive. I also like Louis though I'm not really a fan of childish, temperamental blonds. Macy and Louis were so cute together!

The flow of the story isn't too slow or fast for my liking. It seemed real... their personalities, thoughts, actions.

I don't know what to say anymore. You're simply amazing! You've inspired me. :D

Kudos!

I really like this story! It's great. There is an interesting plotline and fun dialogue. Keep writing!

this was a great story i loved it. It was funny, cute, and adorable!

oh wow that was surprisingly cute at the end.

sorry. i know i havn't reviewed to this story before and i'm onyl suddenly doing so now, but just so you know I like this story. The start didn't seem very intersting, but then I don't know, your story evokes emotions and a lot fo the time they contradict, it makes me feel confused, emotionally confused, like your characters are, not confused as in no idea what your talking about confused.

aw. loved this story. louis is so frikin cute. i love that he's not the stereotypical macho man. :D

whoa.

I really, really enjoyed reading this story.

It's been an amazing experience.

It was rather sweet and funny, could make me somber and think and was plain entertaining. There were parts that seemed to be a bit too drawn, or none-too-perfect parts, but every part of it, I'm glad to have read.
The characters were really different than what we come across usually, and I loved seeing them find themselves, the different aspects of their lives and how peoples' opinions on you depend on the smallest things.

I loved the details like his shades, and his relationship with Jodie-wodie (Jodie-wodie, seriously? lol) was damn amazing ;)

Oh, and their last exchange was really sweet. Corny, as you said, maybe, but really sweet.

Thank you for sharing.

I'm really glad I read this.

Hey Typesour,

I'm a long time fan of 'Could Be Paradise.' I haven't seen any activity from you in a long while and just wanted to stop by and tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Since the first time I read it, I found it to be smartly funny and I always remember how Louis shaved of the lone patch of hair at the front of his head. I'd also have to say that of all the stories on FP, 'Could Be Paradise' is one of, if not, my favourite stories here. So, I hope you continue to write and share with us here at FP.

Looking forward to reading more of your work,
Undercover4Now

o i love this story! it's so funny, but serious and interesting at the same time. great job :)

lol omg its been soo long since ive read an FP romance dt was gotten me captured. nd usuali im not one for these knda characters but i LUVD it.lol i teared up..i LAAFED.lolol louie was soo funi.lol gud work *thumbs up*

I loved this story..it's sad and funny and just totally awesome.
I couldn't stop reading until the end. it's 2:36 and i'm up because i've been reading this. so thanks for writing a great story.

I have tears in my eyes! ^_^

Couldn't she have just spat out the truth?! Why she really went over to Kurt? That bastard needs to be slapped! I get he was hung up on her, but wrenching the phone away from her and shouting at Louis himself was going to far.

Must read on!

gulistanlik

They're going to use Roy's money for Wendy aren't they?

Wow, the both of them have troubled families.

Must read on!

gulistanlik

I knew it! That bastard was cheating on her months, hence why he was 'having to stay late at school' several times. T_T

I knew it! Louis is an artsy person! Yay!