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winter-sakura 2004-06-02 . chapter 1
Hmm..That was interesting. I liked it. It reminded me strongly of American Mcgee's Alice.
DueTuesday 2004-05-24 . chapter 1
i love lewis caroll and the fact that alice is a heroin addict well..it just rocks my rocks.
And Emo is Cliche 2004-01-08 . chapter 1
Hahaha, I love this. Reminds me of that computer game were everything is dead and Alice is trying to kill everyone in a weird version of Alice and wonderland. It's really cool. I like it alot.
Werecat99 2004-01-06 . chapter 1
Yeap. It's morbid alright. Which means, after my own heart.
Good work. And thanks for the review.
MeanGreen 2004-01-01 . chapter 1
That was slightly disturbing
Seeker of the Way 2003-12-23 . chapter 1
This is so alluring, and disturbing, but amazing. Morbid, yes.
Hey - you have me in your profie!! YAY! thank you!!
YEah, i found an interesting balance with my anima, bieng friendly, picked on, adn taking psych of women in college and hearing more bout rape.
breakdown in the waiting room 2003-12-22 . chapter 1
*bows to the queen of haiku*
If I were half as good as you, I'd rule the world.
What's it like to rule the universe? *rests chin on hands and waits for Frugale's answer*
So creepy and perfect.
-Jessica
Keep it 100 2003-12-22 . chapter 1
You're work is awesome. I love how it is realistic and twisted into a point of dark beauty.
~Heart of the Sword
Kelpylion 2003-11-13 . chapter 1
That's frighteningly simple and yet vivid, descriptive, and utterly gruesome. Excellent, Excellent, Excellent piece.
Lina Inverse 2003-11-11 . chapter 1
Very realistic and tragic. Seeing the title freaked me out because my name's Alice, but I know it's just a coincidence that I have the same name as Alice in Wonderland
Tatterdemalion 2003-11-10 . chapter 1
Wow - very powerful. This imagery placed within a haiku format is really intense, probably because it's so direct.

I'm extremely impressed.
Shandris 2003-11-02 . chapter 1
I never read a hiaku that was so gross! I don't know if I like it or not!
ButterflyVamp 2003-11-02 . chapter 1
I love it! It's cool how you used the Alice theme...I always liked the song white rabbit. And thanks for the review. :)
Seras Nova 2003-11-01 . chapter 1
A dark haiku..interesting. I don't think I've written any this morbid. I liek how you related it to Alice in wonderland though. Nice work.

Keep writing.

-Seras
Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-11-01 . chapter 1
OOh, twisted, but I love it! It's short, (naturally a haiku) but I'm extremely fond it, I'm drawn vry much to it. Write more.
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