Hmm..That was interesting. I liked it. It reminded me strongly of American Mcgee's Alice.

i love lewis caroll and the fact that alice is a heroin addict well..it just rocks my rocks.

Hahaha, I love this. Reminds me of that computer game were everything is dead and Alice is trying to kill everyone in a weird version of Alice and wonderland. It's really cool. I like it alot.

Yeap. It's morbid alright. Which means, after my own heart.
Good work. And thanks for the review.

That was slightly disturbing

This is so alluring, and disturbing, but amazing. Morbid, yes.
Hey - you have me in your profie!! YAY! thank you!!
YEah, i found an interesting balance with my anima, bieng friendly, picked on, adn taking psych of women in college and hearing more bout rape.

*bows to the queen of haiku*
If I were half as good as you, I'd rule the world.
What's it like to rule the universe? *rests chin on hands and waits for Frugale's answer*
So creepy and perfect.
-Jessica

You're work is awesome. I love how it is realistic and twisted into a point of dark beauty.
~Heart of the Sword

That's frighteningly simple and yet vivid, descriptive, and utterly gruesome. Excellent, Excellent, Excellent piece.

Very realistic and tragic. Seeing the title freaked me out because my name's Alice, but I know it's just a coincidence that I have the same name as Alice in Wonderland

Wow - very powerful. This imagery placed within a haiku format is really intense, probably because it's so direct.

I'm extremely impressed.

I never read a hiaku that was so gross! I don't know if I like it or not!

I love it! It's cool how you used the Alice theme...I always liked the song white rabbit. And thanks for the review. :)

A dark haiku..interesting. I don't think I've written any this morbid. I liek how you related it to Alice in wonderland though. Nice work.

Keep writing.

-Seras

OOh, twisted, but I love it! It's short, (naturally a haiku) but I'm extremely fond it, I'm drawn vry much to it. Write more.