I envy you.

there's just something in your poems i jus can't resist. i dunno if it's the old school feel or the creative wording, but there's just...something. i feel the poem. i won't repeat what i said on the previous review. all the same.

Wow. That was so...beautiful. Yet so sad... I love it!

My English isn't good enough to describe what I feel about this poem... This is so sad, and yet... I don't know what to say. The ending is really some kind of shock, like the return to reality.

This is a poem that needs rereading for the dumb brain of Kazzi (n Bob) to understand, but I think I have the gist of it, n I think I can say - woah. I love your imagery. How many times have I told you that? It must be near a million? Hm - anyways, have updated my story - thought you should be nudged into reviewing it *winks* considering you told me to remind you. Toodles.

oh this is so beautiful...

This and "Paper Cranes" both sound as if you wrote them about the same experience... or person?

Incredible work. You made the chimes represent so many different elements of emotion.

Heart of the Sword