Sweet! I love it!

Whoot! I'm finally getting around to reading it, hey, this is Rachel. I love this so far!

At this point, I'm wondering why Morgana wasn't disposed of earlier? Amaya is, after all, the ruler of her country, and Amarei her regent. They both certainly have it within their power to have Morgana killed, if they wished. In medeival times, this was far less than unheard of. At least they should have completely expelled her from her duties, not merely suspended them. But anyway, this story is coming along very well! Good job!

Wonderful work thus far; I'm really enjoying it! You have a tendency to confuse "then" and "than"; "than" is only used in a comparison. That can easily be overlooked, however. I noticed a few other small grammar mistakes, but nothing that couldn't have merely been a typing error. This really is quite intriguing; please continue!
-Raven Oghma

Hehe. I'm reviewing on here now. ^^;; I love it how you can stay in the story's era, usually people sometimes mix in current languages and it's annoying. Great job once again!

Good work. I really enjoyed reading this.