|Reviews for My Last|
| The intellect 1/3/04 . chapter 1
im not quite sue wot to write about this, but it seems as you had alot of fun with this mate, keep them close, we all need friends like 'destruction'.
| MoonBlues 12/15/03 . chapter 1
I don't even know how to begin.
I guess first I should say what first came to my mind.
I've been there. I remember 7th Grade was horrible, and I've come close to... things I now couldn't consider. But you shouldn't write it down. This is acctually advice from a err... friend I guess.
He said that no matter what you should never write it down. Don't write the note, and don't write how you will do it. It only makes it more real.
And second of all!
You have AMAZING talent for writing. And I know you're thinking, "Oh chill, that was a while ago..." but just hear me out. You're not allowed to kill yourself. That is an order from a fellow writer. You must fill the world with AT LEAST 126 published books first.
Okay, now I'm done ranting about that.
That was really good writing. Although it was very... sad and depressive. And almost eerie since you know it's real.
Alright. Um... I'm done. Sorry about that rant.
| The Solitary Rose 12/15/03 . chapter 1
wow. thats...deep. the other person's right, you have an excellent writing style... glad that wasn't your last piece... writing is definetly your talent. keep it up.
| dummyboard 11/1/03 . chapter 1
You have such a great writing style...I'm so envious... I'm looking forward to whatever else you decide to post up. Later dayz.