Beautiful in its eeriness. This reminds me of Heathcliff and Catherine in Wuthering Heights.

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loved the entire poem! wonderful! great ambiance

Nice, I like it...Great metaphor.

This reminds me of Hamlet, or perhaps Ophelia, for some reason...post-traumetic stress syndrome. MM. Deeper than it seems, I suspect.
lyv
p.s.
*pokes* planning on writing anything soon? haha no just kidding go at whatever pace.

I absolutely loved that. It had an ethereal feel, an unholy longing that is rare in poetry.
Good work.

Sounds almost vampiric.

"Reach for me, but don't touch me"
Love that line.
You have such a niche for haiku; you can convey so much emotion in the three lines- that's where a lot of haiku writers fail.
-Jessica

splendid. *claps*

This sounds like a tag lie for a really cool unique horror movie (other genres) thing. It is as if the speaker was close to this person now gone and mourns for the contact, like somone who misses their lover, but is afraid if they ARE touched they will be dragged down with them.
It sounds as if they are REALLY trying to get past their mourning with the last line.
very effective!

Thers no compliment good enough for this.I really like this haiku. There are a lot of meanings in it, but its simple and short, which is very hard to do in a haiku.

wow, this one is one of my favs. now

-kriss

I like this one... The idea is really interesting and I don't think I've ever read another poem about this topic.

hiya! thank you for the review! appreciated lots. this is really good...especially the reach for me, but don't touch me. its very effective. well done!

cya )

thats pretty interesting, i like that one. the whole Reach for me but dont touch me part is great.

P.s.- thanks for reviewing "breaking away" i appreciate that.

shauna

I reiterate your comment of talent to you, wonderful job. Thank you for reviewing me...