|Reviews for Grave Dwelling|
| thinking.about.thinking 2/12/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful in its eeriness. This reminds me of Heathcliff and Catherine in Wuthering Heights.
| bach-player 3/8/04 . chapter 1
loved the entire poem! wonderful! great ambiance
| Samekian 2/28/04 . chapter 1
Nice, I like it...Great metaphor.
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2/6/04 . chapter 1
This reminds me of Hamlet, or perhaps Ophelia, for some reason...post-traumetic stress syndrome. MM. Deeper than it seems, I suspect.
*pokes* planning on writing anything soon? haha no just kidding go at whatever pace.
| Werecat99 1/6/04 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved that. It had an ethereal feel, an unholy longing that is rare in poetry.
| PeacefulHarmony 1/1/04 . chapter 1
Sounds almost vampiric.
| breakdown in the waiting room 12/22/03 . chapter 1
"Reach for me, but don't touch me"
Love that line.
You have such a niche for haiku; you can convey so much emotion in the three lines- that's where a lot of haiku writers fail.
| slumberdoll 12/21/03 . chapter 1
| Seeker of the Way 12/10/03 . chapter 1
This sounds like a tag lie for a really cool unique horror movie (other genres) thing. It is as if the speaker was close to this person now gone and mourns for the contact, like somone who misses their lover, but is afraid if they ARE touched they will be dragged down with them.
It sounds as if they are REALLY trying to get past their mourning with the last line.
| Jadedklutz 11/15/03 . chapter 1
Thers no compliment good enough for this.I really like this haiku. There are a lot of meanings in it, but its simple and short, which is very hard to do in a haiku.
| Not all that 11/12/03 . chapter 1
wow, this one is one of my favs. now
| Ellerfru 11/8/03 . chapter 1
I like this one... The idea is really interesting and I don't think I've ever read another poem about this topic.
| Emi Amara 11/2/03 . chapter 1
hiya! thank you for the review! appreciated lots. this is really good...especially the reach for me, but don't touch me. its very effective. well done!
| Enter The Coil 11/1/03 . chapter 1
thats pretty interesting, i like that one. the whole Reach for me but dont touch me part is great.
P.s.- thanks for reviewing "breaking away" i appreciate that.
| Plato's Optic Runaway 11/1/03 . chapter 1
I reiterate your comment of talent to you, wonderful job. Thank you for reviewing me...