 Silver on the Tree 2004-06-27 . chapter 2Hey, really interesting so far!
Felipe's quite a pervert, though...*cringe*
Hey, did you know my brother's named Mikkel, so when I read the name 'Mikhel' I couldn't imagine him any other way ^_^;
Anyways, please update soon! |
 Alibata 2003-11-04 . chapter 2Ang daya mo, not accepting unsigned reviews...what if other people want to comment? :) Hehe.
Let's see...I like Jian. Obvious, noh? Why is one of the gods a little boy? It thought that she was the youngest. (shrug). Interesting, vey. I have no complaints except that you should fix the spacing. It look neater if there's a space between Felipe's dream sequence and the other people. |
 H. M. Banson 2003-11-01 . chapter 1Hey, great story! I really like the names you have for the characters... really cool! This is a great intro to what promises to be a good story!
Always,
~Hollie Marie |
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