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| IceAngelDarkMoon 2003-11-02 ch 1,  | abuseOne word and a contration can make all the difference and yet be said in so many different ways. This is as beautiful piece, not only because of the messages, but because what is being convayed. Whatever point of view the person was hurt, it sounds like they picked up a way of thinking to hide their pain but in the end the real them still tries to peak out. This is amazing (I say stornger words, but I can't spell them!) I'm sorry really could fix so many things, or break so many hearts, depending on it's feelings, great job!! Write more please! Ice Angel |