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Reviews For: Slow Burn
love.strawberries
2005-10-19
ch 1, 		Hey, that was really, really cool... A lotta emotion in four lines!
phoenixa-mechanique
2003-11-06
ch 1, 		Powerful words in 4 lines. However had you had a longer poem with this ending, the impact could have had a wonderful shatter.
To ask for pain through love?

Quite the masochist?

A good poem.
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