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Surautomatism
2004-11-25
ch 1,
'Tis indeed good. Indeed.
phoenixa-mechanique
2003-11-06
ch 1,
I liked this poem.
How someone lures you, you give in and are lured.
Then they try to run away from you. Falling into their own trap. In their own selfishness. Flourishing in the idea that all your attention is with them. And you, the lured, are the victim, foolishly willing to be the suffering.

Hmm..
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