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| InnerBeauty507 2008-04-13 ch 1,   | Goodness, where to start first off the personification of the chains was really effective It just really added alot to it the idea of people just gawking and not caring and finally the ending with oneself being this cage it was truly heartbreaking and enchanting in the sense that you couldnt look away. Most peoples attempt to write this would seem to simplistic dull and pitifull yours was intricately created, and I am very impressed Lovely Job |
| The Spankster 2003-11-02 ch 1, | Awesome work. That was a very forceful and psychological story. The subject of this work is actually very interesting to me. That part of our society that we all choose to ignore fascinates me, and you expressed the situation beautifully. |