Hey, your usage of words for this story is superb. Nice Job on that. It was pretty scary. Please update soon I wanna see what happens! I'm gonna add you to my favorite authors list cause almost every story I read of yours is very well done.

By the way, could you check out my story, "Expensive Bounty". I know I asked you before awhile back, but I have made a revision and this one (In my opinion) is a lot better. Thanks! And keep up the good work.

-he who shows No Mercy