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Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 15
Here's your ** review.
I just went through a mood swing, or can't you tell.
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Keith is a bastard/**.
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Paul is a pig, which makes him a bit better than Keith.
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Jessie is my fave, David would be next, but you ** got rid of him
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oh and in the review i sent right before this, there are exceptions...the Incubus guy, Depth...and Lucy Lu.
So I ** thought she was hot, big deal.
i'll read the third part now.
-Peter/Kathy/Nepheth
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 14
Fizzy?...of B2K...uuh
i'll stick to goth, punk, metal, hard, heavy metal, new metal, alternative, punk rock, and rock, thank you.
Romeo...Paul...same person, yes?
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Radley, has way different taste than i did when i was his age
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let's see, i was into white/pale fellows/gals, black/dyed/ hair, grey/light eyes, long/crazy hair, makeup (eyeliner is a must, lipstic(black or blood red), piercings, (optional) tatoos nothing to overbaord though unless it really works, um a little metro, goth or rock style, into same music as myself. Yep, that's about it. Maybe, i was a little picky... no wonder i never dated anyone...oh well.
-Nepheth
(satan's offspring, lover of death)
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 13
hm...
okay
i suppose
-Neph
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 12
HAHAHAHAH...
AWESOME
I KNEW JESSIE WAS COOL, HE'S LIKE SOMEONE I KNOW, AND I'VE BEEN ROOTING FOR HIM FROM THE BEGINNING.
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Oh, by the way i wanted to ask what that letter Evann gave Radley was about in the first part, i don't think that was answered, it kept slipping my mind until now.
-Nepheth
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 11
P.O.D i hate those **, damn Christian bands.
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 10
Jessie is still awsome non the less.
-me
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 9
i like the screwedupness of the first part better, no offense.
I'm listening to HIM(his imperial majesty) which is appropriate since all they sing about is love and death
-nepheth/peter/kathy
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 8
..okay..
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 7
hm, a little to..er, fuzzy for my taste, but still good.
Truthfully, i don't want Keith and Radley to end up together, or Kenny and Khloe. Oh well, i'll keep reading and see what happens.
Oh, and Nate sucks.
-Neph/kathy/peter
doesn't matter
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 6
Okay then, nice chapter.
Jessie is awsome, he like to listen to singers breath just like me. I'm listening to Malice Mizer right now, so i can hear the lead singer breathing a lot, si i thought that was a cool coincidence.
-Nepheth
aka kathysi
aka Peter
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 5
I've been imagining the characters wrong, i thought they were Asian and/or white but now i'm guessing they are black and/or hispanic. Now i have change the way they look in my head.
nice chapter.
-Nepheth
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 4
is Radley using keith so that Jessie's brother doesn't suspect Jessie is gay?
-neph
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 3
jessie's brother is a bastard
if my brother were alive he'd be a lot more understanding.
nice chapter
-neph
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 2
interesting chapter
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Jessie is definatly my favorite character, i hope he kills someone
-neph
Kathy Si 2004-01-28 . chapter 1
Jessie is definatly my favorite character
i don't like kEITH or evann, or hunter, or adam
but i like radley and david
-neph
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